Dipstikk's comic- progress

This is only not under scraps because for some reason I don't think dipstikk saw it when I put the other one under scraps, but it's at least far enough along not to be obscene as a deviation. Dipstikk, whattaya think? Give me the revised version with Actra finished, please!

PS: This photo is crappy, and when I scan in the final version it'll look much better. My digital camera hates pencil.